1、Life is real, life is earnest.
2、Life would be too smooth if it had no rubs in it.
3、Life is fine and enjoyable, yet you must learn to enjoy your fine life.
4、You can't judge a tree by its bark.
5、Wasting time is roadfdsing oneself.
6、A man is only as good as what he loves.
7、Wealth is the test of a man's character.
8、Death comes to all, but great achievements raise a monument which shall endure until the sun grows old.
9、Suffering is the most powerful teacher of life.
10、A fall into the pit, a gain in your wit.
11、Experience is the best teacher.
12、Home is where the heart is.
13、Merry meet, merry part.
14、Out of sight, out of mind.
15、Practice makes perfect.
16、Walls have ears.
17、Wine in, truth out.
18、No one can call back yesterday. Yesterday will not be called again.昨日不复来。
19、The morning sun never lasts a day.好景不常；朝阳不能光照全日。
20、If you want knowledge, you must toil for it.若要求知识，须从勤苦得。
21、A little knowledge is a dangerous thing.浅学误人。
22、Knowledge advances by steps and not by leaps.知识只能循序渐进，不能跃进。
23、Learn wisdom by the follies of others.从旁人的愚行中学到聪明。
24、The hard part isn’t making the decision. It’s living with it.做出决定并不困难，困难的是接受决定。
25、Fools has fortune.呆人有呆福
26、Life is but a span.人生苦短。
27、Do well and have well. 善有善报。
28、Doubt is the key to knowledge.怀疑是知识的钥匙。
29、Clothes do not make the man.人不在衣装。
30、A man cannot spin and reel at the same time. 一心不能二用
31、Do as the Romans do. 入乡随俗。
32、Custom makes all things easy. 习惯成自然。
33、Sharp tools make good work.工欲善其事，必先利其器。
34、Business is business.公事公办。
35、A young idler, an old beggar。An idle youth, a needy age.少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲
36、A fox may grow gray, but never good.江山易改，本性难移
37、The only limit to our realization of tomorrow will be our doubts of today.实现明天理想的唯一障碍是今天的疑虑。 ——Franklin Roosevelt美国总统罗斯福
38、Fortune knocks once at least at every man's gate.风水轮流转。
39、Do it now 机不可失，时不再来。
40、No man is born wise or learned. 人非生而知之。
41、Misfortunes tell us what fortune is.不经灾难不知福。
42、A guest should suit the convenience of the host.客随主便。
43、If winter comes , can spring be far behind ? ( P. B. Shelley , British poet ) 冬天来了，春天还会远吗?( 英国诗人, 雪莱. P. B.)
44、Sometimes your plans don’t work out because God has better ones.有时候，你的计划不奏效，是因为上天有更好的安排。
45、You can't judge a tree by its bark.人不可貌相。
46、As heroes think, so thought Bruce.英雄所见略同。
47、While there is life, there is hope.有生命便有希望留得青山在，哪怕没柴烧
48、A man is not old as long as he is seeking something.A man is not old until regrets take the place of dreams.只要有一个人还有所追求，他就没有老。直到后悔取代了梦想，一个人才算老。 ——J. Barrymore巴里穆尔
49、A relationship should be between two people, not the whole world.爱情是两个人的事，与旁人无关。
50、Genius only means hard-working all one's life.天才只意味着终身不懈的努力。 ——Mendeleyev俄国化学家门捷列耶夫
——大学英语作文格言 60句菁华
1、Sow nothing, reap nothing.
2、Life is the art of drawing sufficient conclusions form insufficient premises.
3、Life is a great big canvas, and you should throw all the paint on it you can.
4、Nurture passes nature.
5、One never lose anything by politeness.
6、Death comes to all, but great achievements raise a monument which shall endure until the sun grows old.
7、A fall into the pit, a gain in your wit.
8、A guest should suit the convenience of the host.
9、Behind the mountains there are people to be found.
10、Faith can move mountains.
11、Good wine needs no bush.
12、He that promises too much means nothing.
13、Never judge by appearances.
14、Practice makes perfect.
15、Strike while the iron is hot.
16、Time tries all things.
17、What is done cannot be undone.
18、Time flies.时光易逝。
19、Time tries truth.时间检验真理。
20、Tomorrow comes never.切莫依赖明天。
21、Learn wisdom by the follies of others.从旁人的愚行中学到聪明。
22、Let bygones be bygones.过去的就让它过去吧。
23、There is no fire like lust, no grip like hate; there is no NET like delusion, no river like craving.贪心是最猛烈的火，憎恨是最坏的执着，迷惑和错误的见解是最难脱逃的网，爱欲是最难渡过的河流。
24、Kings go mad, and the people suffer for it.君王发狂，百姓遭殃。
25、A little body often harbors a great soul.浓缩的都是精品
26、Doubt is the key to knowledge.怀疑是知识的钥匙。
27、Better to ask the way than go astray. 问路总比迷路好。
28、Clothes do not make the man.人不在衣装。
29、When a man speaks or acts with good intention. Then happiness follows him like his shadow that never leaves him.当一个人的言谈和举止怀着良善动机，快乐便像影子般地跟随他。
30、Custom makes all things easy. 习惯成自然。
31、Experience is the best teacher. 实践出真知
32、When work is a pleasure, life is joy! When work is duty, life is slavery.工作是一种乐趣时，生活是一种享受!工作是一种义务时，生活则是一种苦役。
33、Sometimes one pays most for the things one gets for nothing.有时候一个人为不花钱得到的东西付出的代价最高。 ——Albert Einstein美国科学家爱因斯坦
34、A fox may grow gray, but never good.江山易改，本性难移
35、Every potter praises hit pot. 王婆卖瓜，自卖自夸
36、Learn to walk before you run. 循序渐进
37、Fact speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩
38、Whatever is worth doing is worth doing well.任何值得做的事就值得把它做好!
39、The only limit to our realization of tomorrow will be our doubts of today.实现明天理想的唯一障碍是今天的疑虑。 ——Franklin Roosevelt美国总统罗斯福
40、Courtesy costs nothing.礼多人不怪。
41、Life is a journey, not the destination, but the scenery along the should be and the mood at the view.人生就是一场旅行，不在乎目的地，在乎的应该是沿途的风景以及看风景的心情。
42、Nurture passes nature.教养胜过天性。
43、You have to believe in yourself. That's the secret of success.你必须相信自己，这是成功的关键。 ——Charles Chaplin美国演员卓别林
44、A book that remains shut is but a block. 书本不常翻，犹如一块砖
45、Do not pull all your eggs in one basket.别把所有的蛋都放在一个篮子里。
46、No pains, no gains. 一份耕耘，一份收获
47、The important thing in life is to have a great aim , and the determination to attain it. (Johan Wolfgang von Goethe , German Poet and dramatist) 人生重要的事情就是确定一个伟大的目标，并决心实现它。(德国诗人戏剧家 歌德 . J . M .)
48、Let the cat out of the bag.泄漏天机。
49、Great hopes make great man.伟大的抱负造就伟大的人物。
50、Do not teach fish to swim.不要班门弄斧。
51、A good medicine tasks bitter.良药苦口。
52、If winter comes , can spring be far behind ? ( P. B. Shelley , British poet ) 冬天来了，春天还会远吗?( 英国诗人, 雪莱. P. B.)
53、A still tongue makes a wise head. 寡言者智
54、I want to bring out the secrets of nature and ap* them for the happiness of man . I don't know of any better service to offer for the short time we are in the world .(Thomas Edison , American inventor) 我想揭示大自然的秘密，用来造福人类。我认为，在我们的短暂一生中，最好的贡献莫过于此了。 (美国发明家 爱迪生. T.)
55、Industry is the parent of success. 勤奋是成功之母
56、Things done can not be undone. 覆水难收。
57、All things in their being are good for something.
58、A man is only as good as what he loves.一个人要用他所爱的东西有多好来衡量。
59、Sow nothing, reap nothing.春不播，秋不收。
60、A relationship should be between two people, not the whole world.爱情是两个人的事，与旁人无关。
——大学英语作文万能句子 40句菁华
1、...pose a great threat to... ...对..造成了一大威胁(eg.Pollution poses a great threat to our existance.)
2、...touch sb. on the raw ....触到某人的痛处
3、对这一问题持有不同态度 hold different attitudes towards this issue
4、在一定程度上 to some extent / degree / in some way
5、日益激烈的社会竞争 the increasingly fierce social competition
6、扬长避短 Exploit to the full one’s favorable conditions and avoid unfavorable ones
7、…的健康发展 the healthy development of …
8、身心两方面 both physically and mentally
9、优先考虑 / 发展… give (top) priority to sth
10、相反 in contrast / on the contrary。
11、毫无疑问 Undoubtedly, / There is no doubt that…
12、1not（that）…but（that）…不是，而是
13、Yesterday will not be called again。昨日不复来。
14、Man is now facing a big problem （） which is becoming more and more serious。人类正面临着一个严重的问题…，这个问题变得越来越严重。
15、From my point of view， it would be better if…在我看来……也许更好
16、Time past cannot be called back again。光阴一去不复返。
17、Life is measured by thought and action， not by time。衡量生命的尺度是思想和行为，而不是时间。
18、It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation。很紧迫的是，应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展。
19、It's generally recognized that… 它普遍认为…
20、There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of。毫无疑问，对问题应予以足够的重视。
21、The progress of thee society is based on harmony。社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。
22、Taking all these factors into consideration， we naturally come to the conclusion that。把所有这些因素加以考虑，我们自然会得出结论。
23、There is no doubt that （job-hopping） has its drawbacks as well as merits。毫无疑问，跳槽有优点也有缺点。
24、People's opinions about ______ vary from person to person。 Some people say that ____。To them，_____。关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为（说）……，在他们看来，……
25、Recently， the problem of has aroused people's concern。最近，问题已引起人们的关注。
26、what's far more important is that… 更重要的是…
27、I sincerely believe that。我真诚地相信。
28、Nothing is more important than the fact that… 没有什么比这更重要的是…
29、Therefore， in my opinion， it's more advisable…因此，在我看来，更可取的是…
30、Therefore， we have the reason to believe that…因此，我们有理由相信…
31、A case in point is … 一个典型的例子是…
32、It may be true that ， but it doesn't mean that。可能是对的，但这并不意味着。
33、Hence/Therefore， we'd better come to the conclusion that。因此，我们最好得出这样的结论。
34、All time is no time when it is past。光阴一去不复返。
35、Many people insist that。很多人坚持认为。
36、The best way to solve the troubles is。解决这些麻烦的最好办法是。
37、（） has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way。（）已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。
38、Obviously， If we want to do something ， it is essential that。显然，如果我们想做某事，很重要的是。
39、Try not to become a man of success but rather try to become a man of value。不要为成功而努力，要为作一个有价值的人而努力。
40、Recognizing a problem is the first step in finding a solution 。认识到问题是找到解决办法的第一步。
——高考英语作文常用谚语格言汇集 40句菁华
1、No rose without a thorn.没有不带刺的玫瑰。
2、Victory belongs to the most persevering. 坚持不懈才能胜利。
3、There is no royal road to learning.书山有路勤为径，学海无涯苦作舟。
4、Good things come to those who wait. 苍天不负苦心人。
5、Happy is he who owes nothing.要想活得痛快，身上不能背债。
6、Don't make a mountain out of a molehill.不要小题大做。
7、Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。
8、All work and no play makes Jack a dullboy.只工作,不玩耍,聪明小伙也变傻。
9、Truth has always a sure bottom. 真理总能站住脚。
10、Count one's chickens before they are hatched.蛋未孵先数雏。
11、Work won't kill, but worry will. 操劳不丧身，忧愁愁煞人。
12、A good book is a good friend.好书如挚友。
13、God helps those who help themselves. 天助自助者。
14、Books and friends should be few but good.读书如交友，应求少而精。
15、Blood is thicker than water.血浓于水。
16、There is no royal road to learning. 学无坦途。
17、Patience is the best remedy.忍耐是良药。
18、Knowledge is long, life is short. 吾生有涯，而知无涯。
19、Time is money.时间就是金钱。
20、Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成。
21、A candle lights others and consumes itself.蜡烛照亮别人，却毁灭了自己。
22、Books and friends should be few butgood.读书如交友，应求少而精。
23、Children are what the mothers are.耳濡目染，身教言传。
24、A friend is never known till a man hasneed.需要之时方知友。
25、A little body often harbors a great soul.浓缩的都是精品。
26、A bad workman always blames his tools.不会撑船怪河弯。
27、Do as the Romans do.入乡随俗。
28、A word spoken is past recalling.一言既出，驷马难追。
29、No pains, no gains.没有付出就没有收获。
30、All roads lead to Rome.条条大路通罗马。
31、光阴似箭，日月如梭。
32、每事宽一分即积一分之福。
33、凡好何须父业，儿若不肖空积。
34、远山难救近火，远亲不如近邻。
35、倘若你想改变你的世界，首先就应该改变你自己。
36、人的美德的荣誉比他的财富的荣誉不知大多少倍。
37、人生有驿站，但不能停歇得太久，否则会迷失方向。
38、书籍使我变成了一个幸福的人，使我的生活变成轻松而舒适的诗。
39、我认为再没有比那些只顾自己鼻子尖底下一点事情的人更可悲的了。
40、一个人追求的目标越高，他的才力就发展得越快，对社会就越有益。
——大学英语四级作文万能句子 50句菁华
1、My answer is that …. I have several reasons, and they’re good ones. The first is the one that … 我的回答是…。我有几个理由而且它们是很充分的理由。第一个是…
2、I just don’t get excited over the idea of … 我对…主张并不感到激动。
3、I think its time we put a stop to something. 我认为是我们停止某事的时候了。(it’s time (that、后的从句要用虚拟，既(should)+动词原形)
4、It is not half so important to do something as it is to do something. 和做某事相比，做某事的重要性连一半都不及。
5、Although many people (believe、that …, I doubt whether the (argument、bears further (*ysis). 虽然有许多人相信…，但我怀疑这个论点能否经得起进一步的推敲。
6、From a personal perspective, I also prefer to … 从个人的角度来看，我也喜欢…
7、现在，很普遍，许多人喜欢，因为，另外（而且）。
8、任何事物都是有两面性，也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。
9、人类正面临着一个严重的问题，这个问题变得越来越严重。
10、但是，我认为这不是解决的好方法，比如。最糟糕的是。
11、然而，正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样，也有它的不利的一面，象。
12、完全同意这种观点（陈述），主要理由如下： I fully agree with the statement that ______ because______.
13、I just don’t get excited over the idea of…我对…主张并不感到激动。
14、I’m not suggesting that…我并不是建议… （该句中suggest做建议讲要用虚拟，即(should)+动词原形）
15、I find the statement of…to be too narrow.我觉得…的观点过于狭隘。
16、I can tell you from experience that…凭我的经验可以告诉你…
17、Personally,I am standing on the side of…就个人而言，我站在…的一边。
18、At an individual level,I feel that…从我个人的角度出发，我觉得…
19、不管怎样，受我支配的祈祷者总是从地铁走向远方。
20、教育家定出了分配给他的局部的位置。
21、在溪边，厨子在做钩形饼干之前查阅了一本食谱。
22、布朗先生拥有闹市区塔里的棕色毛巾。
23、酣睡之后，哭泣的清扫者继续窥视峭壁上的羊。
24、他叙述说他与亲戚们隔离开了。
25、人活着总是要得罪一些人的就要看那些人是否值得得罪。
26、爱是长在我们心里的藤蔓。
27、被耽搁的运动员代表团停留在操场上。
28、爱情就像一只蝴蝶，它喜欢飞到哪里，就把欢乐带到哪里。
29、蛋糕制造者无缘无故地用抖动的耙子摇一条赤裸的蛇。
30、无论如何，这个分离比是精确的。
31、她发誓要戴那些看起来像梨子的珍珠。
32、世上无难事，只要肯登攀。
33、我得知有学问而认真的人靠学问挣很多钱。
34、在这个世界上，男人最珍贵的财产就是一个女人的心。
35、拂晓时在草坪上，打呵欠的溺水者开始皱眉头。
36、你的吻还在我的唇上发烫，从此我的日子变得如此美丽。
37、在当风的窗口，寡妇发现有条瞎眼蛇在游动。
38、爱很难投入，但一旦投入，便更难走出。
39、content in the thought that...满足于...的想法
40、有/提供如下理由/ 证据 have/provide the following reasons/evidence
41、缓解压力/减轻负担 relieve stress/burden
42、优先考虑/发展… give (top) priority to sth
43、与…比较 compared with…/in comparison with
44、扬长避短 Exploit to the full one’s favorable conditions and avoid unfavorable ones
45、取其精髓，取其糟粕 Take the essence and discard the dregs。
46、对…有害 do harm to/be harmful to/be detrimental to
47、重视 attach great importance to…
48、社会地位 social status
49、It is high time that something was done about
50、From all the reasons/consideration above,it is evident/clear/obvious that
——新视野大学英语3词汇 50句菁华
1、wear a vacant expression 带着茫然的表情
2、become essential to 对……必不可少
3、be emotionally drained and exhausted 在情感上疲惫
4、end up doing sth. 以做某事而告终
5、reconcile sth. with sth. else 使和谐一致
6、iron deficiency 缺铁
7、iron supplements铁离子补充剂
8、at risk 有危险
9、compromise one’s exercise performance 使某人的运动成绩大打折扣
10、be likely to do sth. 有可能做某事
11、be advisable to do sth. 做某事是明智的
12、throw up 呕吐
13、avoid doing sth. 避免做某事
14、over sb.’s protest 不顾某人的* 14. quest for 对······的追求
15、spend some time doing sth. 花时间做某事
16、evaluate one’s class performance 评估某人的课堂表现
17、It is worthwhile for sb. to do sth. 某人做某事是值得的
18、work on 从事；致力于
19、assemble 组装
20、be dedicated to 献给……;专心致志
21、come up with an idea 想出一个主意
22、decline interviews 谢绝采访
23、identify 识别
24、the preceding shift 上一位（批）值班人员
25、make no attempt to 没有尝试去做某事
26、go about providing for her needs 开始做她所需要的
27、remove…from…从……拿开
28、agree on 就······取得一致意见
29、be busy with / doing sth忙于做某事
30、a sensible arrangement 明智的安排
31、check in 登记 / 报到
32、punctual 准时的
33、on the subject of 谈到；关于
34、be on one’s agenda 在某人的议事日程上
35、reach a conclusion 得出结论
36、There is no use/sense/point doing sth. 做某事无用/无意义
37、mushroom 迅速发展
38、insist on doing sth. 坚持做某事
39、premarital agreement/prenuptial agreement 婚前协议
40、address the problem 处理这个问题
41、shield sth. (from… ) to 保护······（免于······）使能够······
42、under pressure 在压力之下
43、cite an example 举例子
44、enter into 达成（协议）；订立（合同）；开始做某事
45、be free with 慷慨使用
46、cruise through （比赛中）轻松取胜
47、by word of mouth 口头地
48、attract much publicity 吸引大量的公众注意力
49、on that occasion 在那种情形下
50、dynamic 充满活力的
——高级英语作文 50句菁华
1、suppose 替换should
2、due to替换because of
3、cover替换walk/read
4、be rushed off one’s feet 替换be busy in doing
5、beneath替换under
6、occasionally替换sometimes /once in while
7、as a matter of fact 替换in fact
8、强迫 coerces into(coerce means you make someone do something s/he does not want to)、compel 代替force
9、赞扬 extol(stronger than praise)、compliment(polite and politic 代替praise
10、艰巨的 arduous (if something is arduous、it is difficult and tiring、and involves a lot of efforts) 代替difficult
11、公正的 impartial(someone who is impartial is able to give a fair opinion or decision on something. ) 代替fair
12、永久的 perpetual(a perpetual state never changes)、immutable(something immutable will never change or be changed) 代替forever
13、热情 zeal (a great enthusiasm)、fervency (sincere and enthusiasm) 代替enthusiasm
14、独自的 solitary (if someone is solitary、there is no one near him/her 代替lonely
15、非常小的 minuscule(very small)、minute 代替small
16、改变：Transform 代替Change
17、保存Preserve、Conserve[保护资源用的就是这个词]，protect这个词用在保护具体的东西 代替Keep
18、忽略Ignore、Difference 代替Neglect
19、好的Beneficial、Advantageous 代替Good
20、有害的Inhumane、Detrimental、Baneful 代替Harmful
21、重要的Crucial 、Extremely important、Significant(amount or effect large enough to be important) 代替Important
22、map out 制定出
23、human civilization 人类文明
24、mainstream culture 主流文化
25、national pride 民族自豪
26、adhere to the tradition 坚持传统
27、maintain the world peace 维护世界和*
28、heritage 遗产
29、achievements of art 艺术成就
30、skyscraper 摩天大楼
31、national identity and value 民族特性和价值观
32、all the same 依然；照样 however 然而；无论如何
33、meanwhile 与此同时 thirdly 第三
34、as a result结果 in sum 总之，简而言之
35、beside 此外 for this purpose 为了这个目的`
36、above all 最重要的'是 accordingly 于是
37、after all 毕竟 fortunately 幸运地
38、in fact 事实上 unlike 不像……；和……不同
39、particularly特别地 unlike …不像……；和……不同
40、though/although 尽管 no doubt 无疑地
41、even though即使 otherwise 否则
42、after/after that/afterwards此后 by this time 此时
43、by the way 顺便提一句 then 然后
44、巨大的、大的Massive、Colossal、Tremendous 代替Big
45、不同Gap、Distinction 代替Difference
46、污染Contamination 代替Pollution
47、危险Peril、Hazard 代替Danger
48、模糊的Obscure unknown or Known by only a few people 代替Vague
49、名望Prestige(describe those who are admired)、Reputation 代替Fame
50、首要的Radical (very important and great in degree)、Fundamen 代替Primary
——高考英语作文常用短语 50句菁华
1、开拓心胸to broaden the mind
2、调剂生活to make life pleasant
3、灌输知识to impart knowledge into someone
4、跟上时代to keep up with the times
5、贡献国家to contribute oneself to the country
6、作笔记to take notes
7、走快捷方式to cut the corner
8、美化环境 to beautify the environment
9、提升生活质量 to promote the qualities of life
10、对...有益 to benefit; to be beneficial to
11、任意停车 to park the car at random
12、排放污烟、废气 to belch smoke, exhaust, fume
13、造成混乱 to bring about the disorder
14、生根 to take root
15、气馁 to lose heart; to get discouraged
16、振作 to pull oneself together; to take heart
17、提升生活的水* to raise the standard of living
18、提钱 to withdraw money
19、自立 to be independent; to stand on ones own
20、喜爱艺术 to have a great liking for arts
21、予人...很深的'印象 to make a deep impression on
22、怀恨 to bear grudge against someone
23、精神抖擞 to be ( feel ) refreshed
24、准备考试 to prepare for the examination
25、逃避现实 to escape the reality
26、感到无聊 to feel ( be ) bored
27、失去耐心 to lose patience
28、进步 to make progress
29、失去联络 to lose track of
30、养成...的习惯 to make it a rule to; to cultivate the habit
31、给...教训 to teach someone a lesson
32、预作保留 to make the reservation
33、鼓励 to encourage, inspire
34、犯法 to violate the law
35、lots of 许多
36、mad about/on狂热迷恋
37、mad at/with sb.生气,愤怒
38、mad with因...发狂
39、make a living谋生
40、meet one's needs满足要求
41、might as well不妨
42、my treat我请客
43、next door 隔壁的,在隔壁
44、none other than 不是别的,正是
45、now and then 时而,偶尔
46、off duty 下班
47、on one's own 独立,独自
48、on the contrary 正相反
49、on the other hand 另一方面
50、on the spot 在场;马上
——英语作文评语 40句菁华
1、You are an excellent boy. I appreciate what you have done in your handwriting and believe you will be successful on your study.
2、You are a clever girl. I appreciate your handwriting so much. Wish you make more improvement on your study.
3、You are a sunny boy. You are very active on class. Pay more attention on English grammar. Work harder and you will make more progress.
4、You are an earnest and hardworking girl. Your English is very good. I hope you can take part in more class activities. Wish you a terrific future.
5、You are a shy but hardworking girl. Try to be more active on class. Be confident, you are the best.
6、You write like a charm. You must have read a lot of literature. Such a rich content, but also shows your literary background. But if the material is adjusted in a certain logical order, this article will be more wonderful.
7、The composition is based on novel materials, wonderful ideas and lively language. Between the lines revealed a new breath of life and children's taste.
8、The author has a clever idea and is good at choosing points to unfold the ups and downs of his writing.
9、A number of commendable sentences add some literary spice to the article.
10、The closing echo should start with a complete structure
11、Case description vivid concrete interesting strong and with the previous metaphor... Finally, in a few words, author shows his appreciation for... The emotion of "is moving
12、The content is close to modern life, novel and unique, grasping the pulse of The Times, and doing the atmosphere of The Times.
13、Be detailed and concise, prioritize and think clearly. Carefully selected, the material seems to be tailored to the subject.
14、The narrative is detailed and specific, the details are vivid and lifelike, the personalities of the characters are bright and prominent, and the images are plump and vivid.
15、The description of the appearance is vivid, the appearance of the characters is lifelike, and the clothes are suitable, just like a mirror reflecting the character. It is really called "life based on each other".
16、The expression description is vivid and vivid, with a few words, outlining the characteristics of the characters at a glance, and the behavior of the characters has a distinct and unique personality.
17、Clear views, clear likes and dislikes, make people at a glance.
18、The center is not clear enough and the idea is not clear enough.
19、The plot is twists and turns, and the narrative process has a certain sense of ups and downs, which reflects the curve of the plot and is fascinating.
20、Brief explanation of time, place and result...
21、The words are very attractive.
22、... A brief description of the highlights; provide
23、The... Change to... Would be more appropriate,
24、Anthropomorphic language makes the article more lively.
25、... And... In sharp contrast...
26、The case description is vivid, concrete and interesting, and the previous metaphor... In the same vein. Finally, in a few words, the author shows his appreciation for... Emotional, moving. The article is coherent to form a complete image.
27、The text is clear, vivid, compact and interesting.
28、The language in this article is not gorgeous, but it is extremely accurate and vivid, rich in emotion and true, and it is enjoyable to read.
29、The psychological depiction is not vivid and specific enough to effectively express the characters' thoughts and attitudes, likes and dislikes.
30、Strong argument, thorough and reasonable *ysis, strong philosophy.
31、Sentences are smooth, sentences are smooth, words are beautiful, narrative images are vivid, and language expression ability is strong.
32、The language is generally fluent, with occasional difficulties.
33、The idea is unreasonable, the content is full of loopholes, can not reflect the real life.
34、The proper use of comparison and comparison techniques, through the differences and differences between things, effectively support the center of the article.
35、Lose no time in using parallelism to explain the characteristics of things from many aspects, which not only strengthens the language, but also leaves a very deep impression on the readers.
36、Although the events with certain narrative value in life were selected, the underlying truth of the events could not be dee* reflected due to the lack of thorough *ysis and in-depth excavation.
37、The language is too brief, which seems to be an outline narrative, but fails to outline it. The writing is incomplete, and the narrative is dry, dull and lifeless. The beginning of the composition:
38、Clear thinking, correct punctuation, complete structure, precise wording,
39、Can reflect the lively scene of the Spring Festival through specific examples.
40、The language is plain and not vivid enough.
