1、You are an excellent boy. I appreciate what you have done in your handwriting and believe you will be successful on your study.
2、You are a clever girl. I appreciate your handwriting so much. Wish you make more improvement on your study.
3、You are a sunny boy. You are very active on class. Pay more attention on English grammar. Work harder and you will make more progress.
4、You are an earnest and hardworking girl. Your English is very good. I hope you can take part in more class activities. Wish you a terrific future.
5、You are a shy but hardworking girl. Try to be more active on class. Be confident, you are the best.
6、You write like a charm. You must have read a lot of literature. Such a rich content, but also shows your literary background. But if the material is adjusted in a certain logical order, this article will be more wonderful.
7、The composition is based on novel materials, wonderful ideas and lively language. Between the lines revealed a new breath of life and children's taste.
8、The author has a clever idea and is good at choosing points to unfold the ups and downs of his writing.
9、A number of commendable sentences add some literary spice to the article.
10、The closing echo should start with a complete structure
11、Case description vivid concrete interesting strong and with the previous metaphor... Finally, in a few words, author shows his appreciation for... The emotion of "is moving
12、The content is close to modern life, novel and unique, grasping the pulse of The Times, and doing the atmosphere of The Times.
13、Be detailed and concise, prioritize and think clearly. Carefully selected, the material seems to be tailored to the subject.
14、The narrative is detailed and specific, the details are vivid and lifelike, the personalities of the characters are bright and prominent, and the images are plump and vivid.
15、The description of the appearance is vivid, the appearance of the characters is lifelike, and the clothes are suitable, just like a mirror reflecting the character. It is really called "life based on each other".
16、The expression description is vivid and vivid, with a few words, outlining the characteristics of the characters at a glance, and the behavior of the characters has a distinct and unique personality.
17、Clear views, clear likes and dislikes, make people at a glance.
18、The center is not clear enough and the idea is not clear enough.
19、The plot is twists and turns, and the narrative process has a certain sense of ups and downs, which reflects the curve of the plot and is fascinating.
20、Brief explanation of time, place and result...
21、The words are very attractive.
22、... A brief description of the highlights; provide
23、The... Change to... Would be more appropriate,
24、Anthropomorphic language makes the article more lively.
25、... And... In sharp contrast...
26、The case description is vivid, concrete and interesting, and the previous metaphor... In the same vein. Finally, in a few words, the author shows his appreciation for... Emotional, moving. The article is coherent to form a complete image.
27、The text is clear, vivid, compact and interesting.
28、The language in this article is not gorgeous, but it is extremely accurate and vivid, rich in emotion and true, and it is enjoyable to read.
29、The psychological depiction is not vivid and specific enough to effectively express the characters' thoughts and attitudes, likes and dislikes.
30、Strong argument, thorough and reasonable *ysis, strong philosophy.
31、Sentences are smooth, sentences are smooth, words are beautiful, narrative images are vivid, and language expression ability is strong.
32、The language is generally fluent, with occasional difficulties.
33、The idea is unreasonable, the content is full of loopholes, can not reflect the real life.
34、The proper use of comparison and comparison techniques, through the differences and differences between things, effectively support the center of the article.
35、Lose no time in using parallelism to explain the characteristics of things from many aspects, which not only strengthens the language, but also leaves a very deep impression on the readers.
36、Although the events with certain narrative value in life were selected, the underlying truth of the events could not be dee* reflected due to the lack of thorough *ysis and in-depth excavation.
37、The language is too brief, which seems to be an outline narrative, but fails to outline it. The writing is incomplete, and the narrative is dry, dull and lifeless. The beginning of the composition:
38、Clear thinking, correct punctuation, complete structure, precise wording,
39、Can reflect the lively scene of the Spring Festival through specific examples.
40、The language is plain and not vivid enough.
——英语作文 40句菁华
1、Learn and live.
2、Learn to walk before you run.
3、Let bygones be bygones.
4、Life is but a span.
5、Life is half spent before we know what it is.
6、Like a rat in a hole.
7、Like mother, like daughter.
8、教育家定出了分配给他的局部的位置。
9、无美德女孩的职责就是在郊区洗脏衬衣和裙子。
10、在溪边，厨子在做钩形饼干之前查阅了一本食谱。
11、假如每次想起你我都会得到一朵鲜花，那么我将永远在花丛中徜徉。
12、我拒绝控告导火索散播混乱。
13、没有谁对不起谁，只有谁不懂得珍惜谁。
14、这种耐水材料适合用在瀑布附近的天线。
15、流浪的乐队把她那位打着绷带的丈夫遗弃在天鹅岛上。
16、一加仑汽油和尼龙工作裤落进了山谷。
17、陷在缝中的制图者用皮带轻击塞子套。
18、她发誓要戴那些看起来像梨子的珍珠。
19、不懂世故，幼稚可笑。
20、放在稳定设置的桌子上的蔬菜和药片没有显示不稳定性。
21、爱是一盏永不昏暗的明灯。
22、在炎热的旅馆里，热心的投票者没有注意到显而易见的笔记本。
23、在当风的窗口，寡妇发现有条瞎眼蛇在游动。
24、Claiming something is true misses the point , while presenting verifiable fact proves its correctness .
25、Ignoring cause and effect is exactly the same thing as failing to look both ways when crossing a busy intersection .
26、The greatest problem with political and religious zealots is their total i*lity to consider the views of others .
27、除了不诚实的`人外，任何诚实的人都能得到蜂蜜，人人都这么想。
28、算术老师把艺术家的人造物品有节奏地放到运载工具里。
29、根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出…很显然…，但是为什么呢?
30、在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。
31、We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.
32、I think it’s time we put a stop to something.我认为是我们停止某事的时候了。(it’s time(that)后的从句要用虚拟，既(should)+动词原形)
33、My final and perhaps my best reason for not doing something is…我不做某事最终的，或许最好的理由是…
34、For these reason,I recommend that…出于这些原因，我推荐/建议…(recommend做建议讲时，接从句要用虚拟，即谓语用(should)+动词原形)
35、My view is that…我的观点是…
36、I’m not entirely convinced of…我并不完全信服…
37、I cannot entirely agree with the idea that…我无法完全同意这一观点…
38、37)There is another reason why I cast my preference for…我倾向于…还有另外一个原因。
39、然后在熟悉这些单词的读法；
40、关于……人们有不同的.观点。一些人认为……
——英语作文谚语 40句菁华
1、书是随时携带的花园。
2、从善如登，从恶如崩。
3、天理地理，有钱有理。
4、王婆卖瓜，自卖自夸。
5、生命不止，奋斗不息。
6、一鸟在手胜过双鸟在林。
7、下不得毒手，成不了财主。
8、人行千里路，胜读十年书。
9、力是压大的，胆是吓大的。
10、吃得苦中苦，方为人上人。
11、猫鼠不同眠，虎鹿不同行。
12、行为不正经，舌头短三分。
13、鸟多不怕鹰，人多把山*。
14、老牛肉有嚼头，老人言有听头。
15、人必须有自信，这是成功的秘密。
16、人有恒心万事成，人无恒心万事崩。
17、落红不是无情物，化作春泥更护花。
18、顺水行舟一人易，逆水划船十人难。
19、Life goes on and struggles on.
20、No poisonous hand, no rich man.
21、People go up and water flows down.
22、Do what you don't want to do to others.
23、Force is strong, courage is frightening.
24、He bought cheap firewood and cooked rice.
25、He who beats no one in the face, eats no bowl.
26、The poor have a good heart and the rich a knife.
27、A liar is not believed even when he tells the truth.
28、Not afraid of no good, just afraid of no good people.
29、If you are not afraid of ghosts, you are afraid of people.
30、Books are gardens that can be carried with you at any time.
31、Thousands of miles on foot is better than ten years'study.
32、Birds of a feather flock together and people flock together.
33、It is easier to sail along the river than to row against it.
34、Old beef has a chewing head, old people have a listening ear.
35、Steal money, two or three days; sweat money, ten thousand years.
36、It's fair to say it's fair, but mother-in-law says it's right.
37、People must have self-confidence, which is the secret of success.
38、Grown from sludge but unstained, posing elegantly without being flirtatious.
39、Everyone sees the advantage but not the harm. Fish sees the food but not the fishing.
40、Father expects his son to become a dragon, and son expects his father to ascend to heaven.
——英语高中作文 40句菁华
1、A bad beginning makes a bad ending.
2、A bird in the hand is worth than two in the bush.
3、A bully is always a coward.
4、A burden of one's choice is not felt.
5、A close mouth catches no flies.
6、A constant guest is never welcome.
7、Adversity leads to prosperity.
8、A fall into a pit, a gain in your wit.
9、If you have any questions or requests, please let me know.
10、No matter what you do in the future, English will always be important.
11、Smoking has a great influence on our health.
12、It is a great honor for me to introduce to you one of my very best friend, Liu Xiang.
13、From this earthquake, I realized that the power of the mass is endless.
14、称谓：
15、正文
16、我希望能有更好的成绩，我擅长英语和语文，但是我的数学需要提高，我要更加努力学习
17、Respect yourself, or no one else willrespect you.
18、Ill news travels fast.
19、Rome was not built in a day.
20、Do as you would be done by.
21、Its not the gay coat that makes the gentleman.
22、It is hard to please all.
23、Lost years are worse than lost dollars.
24、Gold will not buy anything.
25、One good turn deserves another.
26、Time is money.
27、The invention of…brings about numerous/ countless advantages to us.
28、Despite these advantages, its own disadvantages should not be neglected.
29、Summeris sultry. That is the reason why I don't like it.
30、So precious is time that we can't afford to waste it.
31、apt to易于
32、as a result(of) 因此,由于
33、as a rule 通常,照例
34、as far as 远至,到...程度
35、as follows 如下
36、as if 好像,防腐
37、as regards 关于,至于
38、as to 至于,关于
39、as well as 除...外(也),即...又
40、as well 同样,也,还
——想象作文评语 40句菁华
1、情节*直，毫无悬念，*铺直叙似记流水账。
2、构思不合常理，内容漏洞百出，不能反映生活的真实。
3、情节大起大落，转换太快，不够连贯自然。
4、适当地运用对比比较等手法，通过事物相互间的悬殊与差异，有力地佐证文章的中心。
5、巧妙地运用拟人手法，使文中的物像具备了人的行为特征人的思想情感，使之从侧面体现文中主人公的心灵历程。
6、选材*淡无奇，过于老旧粗俗简单幼稚，不具新意，难于深刻地反映生活的时代性真实性。
7、虽述*常事，但分析透彻合理，理性挖掘较深，凸现了事件的本质。
8、这是一篇想象类的文章。小作者充分发挥了自己的想象力，对小雨点乐乐在城市的奇遇，进行了细致地描述。生动细腻的笔触，充满童趣的语言，极大地引起了读者的阅读兴趣，是一篇值得推荐的习作！
9、能过合理的想象，反映出意味深长的哲理，…行文流畅，简洁，充分发挥了自己的想像力，是一篇不错的…文章清逸婉丽，流畅连贯，尤其人物语言幽默风趣，再加上一些精妙词语的.使用，无形中为文章增添了不少情趣。
10、文章以…为结尾，言简意赅，其味无穷。
11、能把人物内心活动写得十分生动，的确难能可贵，给人留下了深刻的印象。
12、文章真实感强，立体感强，可读性强，趣味性强、以敏锐的社会洞察力，以童话反映现实阴暗面，并以生动的语言，描绘出一幅幅贪婪众生相，称得上入木三分。
13、主题凝炼，集中，议论深刻，有力，震撼人心。
14、全文语言生动准确，情节精彩曲折，仿佛将读者带进了开心乐园，令人眉开眼笑、全文通俗易懂，趣味性强。
15、文章线索明朗，主题突出，紧紧围绕…进行、文章开头与结尾时的诗化语言，充满想象与韵律之美，令人愿读，爱读，不忍释手。
16、全文节奏明快，语言清新，始终洋溢着诙谐与风趣，读来其乐无穷。
17、本文内容生动丰富，语言新颖清爽，结构独特合理。
18、文章真实生动，情真意切，特别是…使用权文章极具感染力，发人深思。
19、开头简洁自然，结构清晰，心理描写真实，体现出作者良好的语言驾驭能力。
20、作者观察细致，想像力丰富，运用拟人，比喻等手法，使生动活泼，引起了读者的兴趣。
21、文章在民间传说的基础上，进行合理想象和生动描述，演绎出一篇精彩的童话故事，读来饶有趣味。
22、…要求通过虚构的故事来表达一种哲理。
23、全文语言朴实，结构自然、…文章结构严谨，首尾呼应。
24、文中一系列表现人物动作的动词运用得准确，衬托手法运用得好。
25、你的本文象一条缓缓而流的小溪，清秀，流畅。文笔优美，感情真挚细腻，具有个人风格。愿你在写作路上继续采撷生活中的朵朵浪花，让自己的风格更趋完善!
26、涉世不深的少年走近复杂的社会，这本身就是一种睿智。本文语言*实而柔与，描写很随意，似乎引领读者在心灵的原野上漫步。不足是议论略感缺乏棱角。要知道，精粹的议论可起到画龙点睛的作用，会使你的本文更加深刻。继续练笔，你会更出色!
27、你能够由雪联想到人生追求，从生活细节出发，创新精神可嘉。本文体现了你*白的文风，谁说“白开水”不是最佳的饮料?
28、作为随感，你的本文文思敏捷，意愿纷呈。字里行间流露出的人生体验的丰富与思想感情的细腻让老师感到惊讶。希望你再接再厉，在今后的写作中形成一道属于自己的风景线!
29、你是个很有主见又不乏真知的学生，对你的观点我十分认同，但如果行文安排中结构再紧凑些，那就是锦上添花了。
30、文能言声，我想本文正是你心灵的反映。人生的路途确实很曲折，也很漫长，但只要你努力执地往前走，成功的桂冠必将属于你。
31、景物描写传神逼真，遣词造句贴切得体，景随情生，情景交融，呈现在读者面前的恰似一幅生动传情的写生画。
32、外貌描写生动形象，人物容颜逼真穿着恰当合体，宛如反映人物性格的一面镜子，真是所谓“相由人生”。
33、叙述简略粗糙，唯有框架式结构，人物缺乏鲜明的个性特征。
34、观点明确，好恶立场分明，使人一目了然。
35、主题不够严肃，思想之中尚有糟粕。
36、这是一篇很有新意的想象作文，文章构思巧妙，语言朴实自然。
37、这篇作文取材新颖，构思奇妙，语言生动活泼。
38、行文流畅，简洁，充分发挥了自己的想像力，是一篇不错的文章小作者想象十分丰富，逻辑条理特别清楚。笔下的笔十分神奇，让我都忍不住想拥有一只，虽说是想象，却又不无依据，相信这个想象会变真。
39、小作者以丰富的想象力、极具新意的构思。向我们讲述了啄木鸟帮人啄虫的故事。讽刺了人类为了追求经济利益而过度砍伐树木的行为，最终使得生态环境遭到破坏，引人深思。
40、语言诙谐有趣,情节安排曲折生动,开头与结尾的呼应巧妙.本文篇幅虽短,但内容生动具体,段落明确,语言朴实,通俗易懂.
——英语常用作文谚语 40句菁华
1、不以物喜，不以己悲。
2、为富不仁，为仁不富。
3、千里之堤，溃于蚁穴。
4、多鸣之猫，捕鼠必少。
5、大路朝天，各走半边。
6、当断不断，反受其乱。
7、有心烧香，不论早晚。
8、管中窥豹，只见一斑。
9、邻居失火，不救自危。
10、一回经蛇咬，三年怕草绳。
11、不比不知道，一比吓一跳。
12、世上无难事，只怕有心人。
13、会当凌绝顶，一览众山小。
14、公道不公道，自有天知道。
15、力是压大的，胆是吓大的。
16、天下无难事，只怕有心人。
17、好酒不怕酿，好人不怕讲。
18、读书破万卷，下笔如有神。
19、伟大的抱负造就伟大的人物。
20、非学无以广才，非志无以成学。
21、付出不一定成功，放弃就一定失败。
22、大欺小，不公道；大帮小，呱呱叫。
23、好汉不吃闷头亏，好鸟不钻刺笆林。
24、好汉做事干到底，好马登程跑到头。
25、有一兴必有一败，有一利必有一弊。
26、No poisonous hand, no rich man.
27、To be respected, one must respect oneself.
28、All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
29、Don't ride two horses, don't drink two tea.
30、Usually willing to help others, emergency help.
31、Although the scale is small, it can press jacks.
32、Eating too much hurts the stomach and speaking too much.
33、The bow of the boat is stable and not afraid of the wind.
34、To be rich is not benevolent, to be benevolent is not rich.
35、On other people's meticulous, said that he spent good rice.
36、Pay is not necessarily successful, give up is bound to fail.
37、The ambition is not to be old, but to be a hundred years old.
38、It is difficult to practise courage without taking three risks.
39、There is no widespread talent without learning, and no ambition without learning.
40、He who always wants to win must lose, and he who is not afraid of losing must win.
——英语作文中常见的谚语 40句菁华
1、不经一事，不长一智。
2、人怕引诱，塘怕渗透。
3、天无二日，人无二理。
4、当着矮人，别说矮话。
5、瓜无滚圆，人无十全。
6、刻薄不赚钱，忠厚不折本。
7、水退石头在，好人说不坏。
8、海内存知己，天涯若比邻。
9、会跳的先缩脚，会撞的先缩脖。
10、全是生姜不辣，全是花椒不麻。
11、无才无以立足，不苦不能成才。
12、知识使人谦虚，无知使人傲慢。
13、贪图一时快活，必然留下隐祸。
14、一口吃不成胖子，一步跨不到天边。
15、不怕虎狼当面坐，只怕人前两面刀。
16、劝君更尽一杯酒，西出阳关无故人。
17、囤尖浪费看不见，到了囤底后悔迟。
18、撒网要撒迎头网，开船要开顶风船。
19、既然选择了远方，便只顾风雨兼程！
20、Snakes are cold, wolves are fishy.
21、No melon is round, no man is perfect.
22、No talent can be established without suffering.
23、Musk naturally fragrant, do not need strong wind.
24、There is no basis for words, but facts are proof.
25、It is better to rely on oneself than on one's own.
26、Spread the net head-on, and sail the windward boat.
27、Listening at the same time is clear, but belief is dark.
28、Knowledge makes one humble, ignorance makes one arrogant.
29、Poor and strong, not falling into the clouds of ambition.
30、Old trees withered vines, crows, bridges and watery homes.
31、Shrinking your feet before jumping and neck before bumping.
32、Without winter and cold, I do not know the warmth of spring.
33、Learning is better than seeing, and practicing is better than seeing.
34、If you are not afraid of failing to learn, you are afraid of sincerity.
35、Falling red is not a merciless thing, but a spring mud to protect flowers.
36、There are climbing heads in the mountains and running heads in the distance.
37、The waste of hoarding can not be seen, but regrets later when it comes to hoarding.
38、You are advised to drink more wine, and there is no reason why the sun rises in the west.
39、Tigers are not powerful from the mountains, but fish are difficult to live from the water.
40、They are not afraid of sitting face to face with tigers and wolves, but of knives on both sides.
——英语作文常用谚语中考 40句菁华
1、大路朝天，各走半边。
2、失事容易，得事艰难。
3、宁可认错，不可说谎。
4、耳听为虚，眼见为实。
5、打柴问樵夫，驶船问艄公。
6、水深难见底，虎死不倒威。
7、虎不怕山高，鱼不怕水深。
8、虎离山无威，鱼离水难活。
9、会说难抵两口，会做难抵两手。
10、冷，冷在风里，穷，穷在租里。
11、明月别枝惊鹊，清风半夜鸣蝉。
12、一心想赶两只兔，反而落得两手空。
13、万句言语吃不饱，一捧流水能解渴。
14、不怕衣服有补钉，只怕心灵有污点。
15、不畏浮云遮望眼，只缘身在最高层。
16、人无笑脸休开店，会打圆场自落台。
17、人见利而不见害，鱼见食而不见钓。
18、好男不争财和产，好女不争嫁时衣。
19、看人挑担不吃力，自己挑担步步歇。
20、山是一步一步登上来的，船是一橹一橹摇出去的。
21、The road faces the sky, half way each.
22、Beauty is not in appearance, but in mind.
23、It's hard to see the bottom of the water.
24、More incense burned, more ghosts provoked.
25、Speaking, laughing and laughing, no tutor.
26、Cold, cold in the wind, poor, poor in rent.
27、Let no man lose his money, but roll his tongue.
28、In his old age, the martyrs are full of ambition.
29、People should be solid and fire should be hollow.
30、Rationality is in the matter, good steel is in the edge.
31、Not afraid to eat and pick big bowls, but afraid to work lazy.
32、Don't sleep in the quilt, I don't know how wide the quilt is.
33、Not afraid of angry eyes, only afraid of narrow eyes Bodhisattva.
34、Ask the woodcutter for firewood and the official for boat sailing.
35、Drug farmers see herbs in the mountains, hunters see animals in the mountains.
36、He is not afraid of the hardships of young people, but of the poverty of old people.
37、Everyone sees the advantage but not the harm. Fish sees the food but not the fishing.
38、The moonlight shocked magpies and the breeze chirped cicadas in the middle of the night.
39、Good men don't fight for wealth and property, good women don't fight for fashion clothes.
40、If relatives and friends of Luoyang ask each other, a piece of ice heart is in the jade pot.
——英语谚语作文 40句菁华
1、兵来将挡，水来土掩。
2、吃饭防噎，走路防跌。
3、天理地理，有钱有理。
4、好人争理，坏人争嘴。
5、宁失一事，不失一时。
6、当着矮人，别说矮话。
7、心之所愿，无所不成。
8、丢掉现在，也就失去未来。
9、多锉出快锯，多做长知识。
10、宁可悔了改，不可做了悔。
11、有麝自然香，不用大风扬。
12、砍柴砍小头，问路问老头。
13、读书破万卷，下笔如有神。
14、隔行如隔山，隔行不隔理。
15、一笔画不成龙，一锹挖不出井。
16、前留三步好走，后留三步好退。
17、有理不在言高，有话说在面前。
18、胆大骑龙骑虎，胆小骑猫骑兔。
19、不怕吃饭拣大碗，就怕干活爱偷懒。
20、宁做穷人脚下土，不做财*上珍。
21、接天莲叶无穷碧，映日荷花别样红。
22、Joy is health, depression is pain.
23、Near Zhu is red, near Mo is black.
24、Better lose one thing than lose one moment.
25、Help others in time, help others sincerely.
26、Rigid is easy to break, soft is always there.
27、Don't wait for opportunities, but create them.
28、Eat to prevent choking, walk to prevent falling.
29、Opportunity is not lost, time never comes again.
30、Satisfaction is a gentleman, greed is a villain.
31、Soldiers come to guard, water comes to cover up.
32、The survivor lives in stealth, the deceased is old.
33、Old trees withered vines, crows, bridges and watery homes.
34、You are merciless to others, but they are indifferent to you.
35、Beating water into waves, rocks into fire, provoking disaster.
36、Niang Wanger, Yangtze River Water, Niang Wangnang, a long pole.
37、Daring rides dragons and tigers, cowardly rides cats and rabbits.
38、Without mud legs in the countryside, he starved to death in the city.
39、If you are not afraid of being disrespectful, you are afraid of being wrong.
40、Loving disciples is like loving children, respecting teachers is like respecting fathers.
——读书作文评语 40句菁华
1、事例叙述得生动具体，人物的言行符合各自身份特点。
2、结尾处对人物的赞美，情真意切，感人至深。文章含蓄的结尾，既点题，又耐人寻味。
3、文章最后揭示中心之句，实属点晴之笔，概括之语，短促而有力。结尾令人饱含期待与热情，言已尽，意犹未了。
4、语言简朴，感情*淡，情意不够深切。
5、心理刻画不够生动具体，未能有力地表现人物的思想态度，好恶观。事理：反复从不同角度，不同方面来强调作者的观点，说理充分透彻，立意鲜明。
6、引用名人名言经典事例，具有较强的说服力，更能有力地表达作者的观点。
7、例证丰富，选材得当，描述详略得当，较具说服力。
8、语句通顺，句意流畅，言辞优美，叙写形象生动鲜明，语言表达能力较强。
9、语言*滑晓畅，刻画细致，描写生动;句意含蓄委婉，暗含深意。读毕如酒后余香，不绝于口。
10、文章开头简而得当，通过环境描写来衬托人物心情，十分艺术化。
11、文章线索明朗，主题突出，紧紧围绕…进行文章开头与结尾时的诗化语言，充满想象与韵律之美，令人愿读，爱读，不忍释手
12、虽为一件小事，但作者却描述得有声有色，结尾处不可或缺的点晴之笔，较好地凸现了文章主题`
13、作者构思巧，善于选点展开，行文跌宕起伏，耐人寻味语言活泼明快，富有情趣故事虽*凡，感情却真挚，充沛，感人文章结尾不落俗套，给人以欲还休的感觉
14、全文酣畅淋漓，一气呵成，蕴藏着欢乐与期盼，真挚感人开头出手不凡
15、文章边叙事边抒情。
16、选材新颖独特，不附*庸，一扫迂俗之气，令人耳目一新。
17、虽述*常事，但分析透彻合理，理性挖掘较深，凸现了事件的本质。
18、事件虽小，但反映出较深刻的道理，具有一定的普遍性。
19、简要叙述前因进行铺垫
20、将…改成…更合适些
21、叙事中夹写景以已度人将心比心
22、叙述详细具体，细节描写生动逼真，人物个性鲜明突出，形象丰满，跃然纸上。
23、本文无论是思想性还是艺术性都是很高的，读后让人久久回味。构思巧妙，运用对比手法，深化了主题；情节也颇具匠心，整个故事既出人意料之外，又在情理之中。语言朴实无华，采用白描手法，作者的爱憎包含在叙述之中，能让读者去体会，去深思。
24、文中对父亲的介绍是全面的：从外貌到内心，从工作到生活；对父亲的介绍又是有重点的：重在写父亲的感情。人物形象丰满真实，富于生活气息。为这样的父亲自豪吧，再努力，不要辜负父亲的期望！
25、文中描绘的…清新活泼，欢快明朗字里行间跳动着的童心，使文章也有了生命力
26、虽为一件事，但作者却描述得有声有色，结尾处不可或缺的点晴之笔，较好地突现文章主题。
27、故事虽*凡，感情却真挚充沛感人。
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29、…以…开头较有新意前因后果娓娓道来
30、开篇简明扼要精炼有序；重点描述…给人留下深刻印象
31、本文内容生动丰富，语言新颖清爽，结构独特合理。
32、真是“下笔如有神”啊。看来你一定阅读了大量的文学作品。内容如此丰富，更显示了你的文学功底。只是如果把材料再按一定的逻辑顺序调整一下，此文会更精彩。
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34、这篇文章以具体的事例生动优美的语言新颖别致的写法表现了对美好心灵的由衷赞
35、…以…开头，较有新意。前因后果娓娓道来。
36、过程详细，结尾却简略不全。结构不合理，给人以虎头蛇尾之感。
37、你很善于抓住事物的特点进行具体描绘，展示了，文笔间渗透了情感。文章很有说服力，也发人深思。从写作上来说，情节生动，文章有波澜，读起来深受教益。
38、全文叙事集中，不枝不蔓，语言朴实流畅，感情真挚感人。
39、作者对…观察仔细，描写细腻，语言生动活泼，表现手法富有新意全文语言朴实，结构自然。…文章结构严谨，首尾呼应。
40、语言诙谐有趣，情节安排曲折生动，开头与结尾的呼应巧妙。本文篇幅虽短，但内容生动具体，段落明确，语言朴实，通俗易懂。
