1、But what these people fail to see is that international tourism may bring about a disastrous impact on our environment and local history.
2、In the second place, from psychological aspect, the majority of children seem to tend to have an unfavorable attitude toward additional educational activities.
3、from what has been discussed above, i firmly believe that time will prove that traditional technology and methods would die out with the development of modern science and technology、 the maintenance of the traditionaltechnology and methods is futile.
4、Despite many obvious advantages of bicycle, it is not without its problem.
5、Bicycle cant be compared with other means of transportation like car and train for speed and comfort.
6、From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that advantages of bicycle far outweigh its disadvantages and it will still play essential roles in modern society.
7、There is a general discussion these days over education in many colleges and institutes、 One of the questions under debate is whether education is a lifetime study.
8、This issue has caused wide public concern.
9、As for me, Im in favor of the opinion that education is not complete with graduation, for the following reasons:
10、from what i have mentioned above, we can see clearly that violence on tv has great influence on youngsters behavior.
11、my suggestions to deal with the problem are as follows、 to begin with, it is urgent to create nature reserves、 secondly, certain rare wild animals that are going to be extinct should be collected, fed and reproduced artificially、 finally, those who hunter them must be punished severely.
12、people differ in their attitudes towards failure、 faced with it, some of them can stand up to it, draw useful essons from it and try hard to fulfill what they are determined to do、 others, however, lose heart and give in
13、it is generally believed that the chief reason for the increase in population in developed countries is not so much the rise in birth rates as the decline in death rates as a result of the improvement in medical care.
14、Previous explanations of the rising divorce rate in China are sim* untenable. The fact is that many marriages were sim* based on convenience and wives are no longer willing to accept the abusive domineering attitudes of husbands.
15、Claim that entering the Chinese market offers foreign companies an immediate road to profits are grossly misstated and have been proven wrong time and again、 The key to entering China rests with the phraseology vast potential market, and how long one is willing to wait for returns.
16、It is quite reasonable to assume that modern science and technology (S&T) will continue to advance、 It is no less reasonable to believe that S&T will radically improve the way we live、 However, the same reasoning cannot be applied to improving social interaction.
17、The man who has made up his mind to win will never say impossible.
18、Moreover, children will have less time to play and communicate with their peers due to extra studies, consequently, it is difficult to develop and cultivate their character and interpersonal skills、 They may become more solitary and even suffer from certain mental illness.子玩耍和交流,很难培养他们的个性和交际能力、他们可能变得孤僻甚至产生某些心理疾病.
19、From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that, although extra studies indeed enjoy many obvious advantages, its disadvantages shouldnt be ignored and far outweigh its advantages、 It is absurd to force children to take extra studies after school.
20、Parents should be encourage
21、I wish to request materials for…
22、I am waiting for your quick re*.
23、there is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.
24、there is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.
25、an advantage of using the solar energy is that it wont create any pollution.
26、the reason why we have to grow trees is that they can sup* fresh air for us.
27、so precious is time that we cant afford to waste it.
28、It must be realized that.
29、All in all, we cannot live without But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.总之,我们没有是无法生活的.但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题.
30、Obviously, if we don't control the problem, the chances are that will lead us in danger.
31、Only in this way can we.
32、Recently, the problem of has aroused people's concern.
33、People have figured out many ways to solve this problem.
34、Personally, I am standing on the side of.
35、People's views on vary from person to person. Some hold that . However, others believe that.
36、It may be true that , but it doesn't mean that.
37、It is commonly believed that / It is a common belief that.
38、Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that.
39、There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits.
40、I cannot entirely agree with the idea that.
——大学英语作文万能句子 40句菁华
1、...pose a great threat to... ...对..造成了一大威胁(eg.Pollution poses a great threat to our existance.)
2、...touch sb. on the raw ....触到某人的痛处
3、对这一问题持有不同态度 hold different attitudes towards this issue
4、在一定程度上 to some extent / degree / in some way
5、日益激烈的社会竞争 the increasingly fierce social competition
6、扬长避短 Exploit to the full one’s favorable conditions and avoid unfavorable ones
7、…的健康发展 the healthy development of …
8、身心两方面 both physically and mentally
9、优先考虑 / 发展… give (top) priority to sth
10、相反 in contrast / on the contrary。
11、毫无疑问 Undoubtedly, / There is no doubt that…
12、1not（that）…but（that）…不是，而是
13、Yesterday will not be called again。昨日不复来。
14、Man is now facing a big problem （） which is becoming more and more serious。人类正面临着一个严重的问题…，这个问题变得越来越严重。
15、From my point of view， it would be better if…在我看来……也许更好
16、Time past cannot be called back again。光阴一去不复返。
17、Life is measured by thought and action， not by time。衡量生命的尺度是思想和行为，而不是时间。
18、It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation。很紧迫的是，应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展。
19、It's generally recognized that… 它普遍认为…
20、There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of。毫无疑问，对问题应予以足够的重视。
21、The progress of thee society is based on harmony。社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。
22、Taking all these factors into consideration， we naturally come to the conclusion that。把所有这些因素加以考虑，我们自然会得出结论。
23、There is no doubt that （job-hopping） has its drawbacks as well as merits。毫无疑问，跳槽有优点也有缺点。
24、People's opinions about ______ vary from person to person。 Some people say that ____。To them，_____。关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为（说）……，在他们看来，……
25、Recently， the problem of has aroused people's concern。最近，问题已引起人们的关注。
26、what's far more important is that… 更重要的是…
27、I sincerely believe that。我真诚地相信。
28、Nothing is more important than the fact that… 没有什么比这更重要的是…
29、Therefore， in my opinion， it's more advisable…因此，在我看来，更可取的是…
30、Therefore， we have the reason to believe that…因此，我们有理由相信…
31、A case in point is … 一个典型的例子是…
32、It may be true that ， but it doesn't mean that。可能是对的，但这并不意味着。
33、Hence/Therefore， we'd better come to the conclusion that。因此，我们最好得出这样的结论。
34、All time is no time when it is past。光阴一去不复返。
35、Many people insist that。很多人坚持认为。
36、The best way to solve the troubles is。解决这些麻烦的最好办法是。
37、（） has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way。（）已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。
38、Obviously， If we want to do something ， it is essential that。显然，如果我们想做某事，很重要的是。
39、Try not to become a man of success but rather try to become a man of value。不要为成功而努力，要为作一个有价值的人而努力。
40、Recognizing a problem is the first step in finding a solution 。认识到问题是找到解决办法的第一步。
——英语作文谚语万能句子 40句菁华
1、和气生财，忤逆生灾。
2、宁为玉碎，不为瓦全。
3、尺有所短，寸有所长。
4、贪图小利，难成大事。
5、鞠躬尽瘁，死而后已。
6、上山弯弯腰，回家有柴烧。
7、人横有道理，马横有缰绳。
8、做贼偷葱起，贪污揩油起。
9、多锉出快锯，多做长知识。
10、失去健康，钱再多也没用。
11、常在河边站，哪有不湿鞋。
12、愿为众人死，不为一人亡。
13、拍马有个架，先笑后说话。
14、煮饭要放米，讲话要讲理。
15、老姜辣味大，老人经验多。
16、脚正不怕鞋歪，心正不怕雷打。
17、自己选择的路，跪着也要走下去。
18、一天省下一两粮，十年要用仓来装。
19、宁做穷人脚下土，不做财*上珍。
20、碾谷要碾出米来，说话要说出理来。
21、Without health, money is useless.
22、Keep loyal and devoted to the last.
23、Better confess your mistakes than lie.
24、Beauty is not in appearance, but in mind.
25、Big things turn small, small things turn small.
26、Don't talk at random, don't rush at anything.
27、If you suffer bitterly, you will be a good man.
28、Eat people's mouth short, take people's hands soft.
29、It is better to be a broken jade than a complete tile.
30、Knowledge makes one humble, ignorance makes one proud.
31、Rationality is in the matter, good steel is in the edge.
32、Boasting that nobody loves, no one wears residual flowers.
33、It doesn't matter what you do wrong, others do wrong spanking.
34、Better be the foot of the poor than the treasure chairman Shangzhen.
35、The fox always shows its tail and the snake always spits its tongue.
36、Old ginger tastes hot and spicy, and old people have more experience.
37、Save one or two grains a day and store them in warehouses for ten years.
38、Don't fear the clouds to cover your eyes, only because you are at the top.
39、The frown is cold to the finger of a thousand men, and the bow is sweet to the cow.
40、Old people don't talk about antiquity, and later generations will lose track of it.
——万能作文英语句子 30句菁华
1、Asfaras…isconcerned就……而言
2、Ithastobenoticedthat…它必须注意到，…
3、It'shardlythat…这是很难的……
4、Nothingismoreimportantthanthefactthat…没有什么比这更重要的是…
5、Acaseinpointis…一个典型的例子是…
6、Further,weholdopinionthat…此外，我们坚持认为，…
7、However,wehavetolookattheothersideofthecoin,thatis…
8、就我个人而言，我相信……，因此，我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为……Personally,Ibelievethat_____.Consequently,I'mconfidentthatabrightfutureisawaitingusbecause______。
9、现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外(而且)……
10、根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……很显然……，但是为什么呢?
11、相反，有一些人赞成……，他们相信……，而且，他们认为……
12、……对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的，(也是)非常重要的。首先，……而且……，最重要的是……
13、然而，正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样，……也有它的不利的一面，象……
14、完全同意……这种观点(陈述)，主要理由如下：
15、Thisoffersatypicalinstanceof….
16、Icannotentirelyagreewiththeideathat….我无法完全同意这一观点的…Ibelieve….
17、Aiscompletely/totally/entirelydifferentfromB.
18、A…,ontheotherhand,/incontrast,/while/whereasB….
19、WhileitisgenerallybelievedthatA…,IbelieveB….
20、Despitetheirsimilarities,AandBarealsodifferent.
21、Thereareseveralreasonsfor…,butingeneral,theycomedowntothreemajorones.有几个原因……，但一般，他们可以归结为三个主要的。
22、Generally,theadvantagescanbelistedasfollows.一般来说，这些优势可以列举如下。
23、fromwhereistand....从我的立场来说
24、主语+cannotemphasizetheimportanceof....toomuch再怎么强调..的重要性也不为过
25、...poseagreatthreatto......对..造成了一大威胁(eg.Pollutionposesagreatthreattoourexistance.)
26、stolethespotlightfrom...从...获得大众的瞩目
27、...touchsb.ontheraw....触到某人的痛处
28、itisnotuncommonthat...这是常有的事儿。。
29、..has/havenoalternativebutto...除...外别无选择
30、contentinthethoughtthat...满足于...的想法
——高中英语万能句子 50句菁华
1、from where i stand.
2、You can＇t have a better tomorrow if you don＇t stop thinking about yesterday.
3、From what has been discussed above, I am fully convinced that the leisure life-style is undergoing a decline with the progress of modern society, it is not necessary a bad thing.
4、Many leaders of government always go into raptures at the mere mention of artistic and cultural projects. They are forever talking about the nice parks, the smart sculptures in central city and the art galleries with various valuable rarities. Nothing, they maintain, is more essential than such projects in the economic growth.
5、An investigation shows that many emigrants think that working at city provide them with not only a higher salary but also the opportunity of learning new skills.
6、It must be noted that improvement in agriculture seems to not be able to catch up with the increase in populati
7、Environmental experts point out that increasing pollution not only causes serious problems such as global warming but also could threaten to end human life on our planet.
8、Despite many obvious advantages of bicycle, it is not without its problem.
9、This issue has aroused wide concern among teachers and parents in recent years.
10、Many city residents complain that there are so few buses in their city that they have to spend much more time waiting for a bus, which is usually crowded with a large number of passengers.
11、It is indisputable that there are millions of people who still have a miserable life and have to face the dangers of starvation and exposure.
12、We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.
13、People believe that com*r skills will enhance their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.
14、For my part, I agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons:
15、A large number of people tend to live under the illusion about that they had completed their education when they finished their schooling. Obviously, they seem to fail to take into account the basic fact that a person’s education is a most important aspect of his life.
16、It is commonly accepted that no college or university can educate its students by the time they graduate.
17、An investigation shows that many older people express a strong desire to continue studying in university or college.
18、It is widely acknowledged that com*rs and other machines have become an indispensable part of our society, which make our life and work more comfortable and less laborious.
19、致力于 be committed to
20、理论和实践相结合 integrate theory with practice
21、必然趋势 an irresistible trend of
22、交流思想/ 情感/ 信息 exchange ideas/ emotions/ information
23、跟上的最新发展 keep pace with
24、提出折中提议 set forth a compromise proposal
25、经不起推敲 cannot bear closer *ysis / cannot hold water
26、eople equate success in life with the ability of operating com*r.人们把会使用计算机与人生成功相提并论。
27、expand one’s scope of knowledge.
28、It＇s a long time since I got your last letter.
29、Never，never，never，never give up.
30、If you find a path with no obstacles，it probably doesn＇t lead anywhere.
31、How are you getting along these days？I miyou very much.
32、Views on …vary from person to person。
33、Your letter came into my hand yesterday.
34、Never allow yourself to get discouraged and think that your life is insignificant and can＇t make a change.
35、I am a slow walker，but I never walk backwards.
36、there is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.
37、it is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.
38、the reason why we have to grow trees is that they can sup* fresh air for us.
39、rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.
40、It is natural to believe that , but we shouldn't ignore that.
41、No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that.
42、Here are some suggestions for handling.
43、There are different opinions among people as to.
44、From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second.
45、It may be true that , but it doesn't mean that.
46、As far as something is concerned.
47、It is commonly believed that / It is a common belief that.
48、Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that.
49、There is no doubt that （job-hopping） has its drawbacks as well as merits.
50、I cannot entirely agree with the idea that.
——高考作文万能素材 50句菁华
1、当你独处幽居之时，手中捧书而读则感心情大好，豁达明朗。这便是读书的第一点益处：怡情。读李清照，婉约之意便从诗句中盎然于胸；读辛弃疾，豪迈奔放犹如壮阔波澜击打心岸；读司马迁，源远流长好似眉山韵水渲染记忆；读鲁迅，妙言智语恰是世间百态荡气回肠。读则有感，感则有悟，悟则有益。所以说，读书足以怡情。
2、钟爱阳光的味道，钟爱阳光折射的光线散发出五光十色的梦境，暖暖的色彩，如透明的音符在指尖跳动，心动而悠然，清浅而明媚，看时光缓缓慢移，看青葱年华逐渐隐去，岁月又曾添了新的色彩，一寸光阴，一程情绪，一种思绪，一层断章，安静的停歇在岁月的一角，用纤瘦的十指触摸阳光的暖意，感受生活的点点滴滴，原来，世间还是如此美丽！
3、能为别人开花的心是善良的，这善良之花必将散发出爱心的芬芳；能为别人付出劳动是伟大的，这伟大的劳动一定能结出善念的硕果。一次无偿的献血是一朵花，一次受伤后的救助是一朵花，一次善意的批评是一朵花，一句关切的问候是一朵花，一个亲切的微笑是一朵花，一次跌倒后的挽扶是一朵花为别人就是帮助，为别人就是爱心，为别人就是善念，为别人就是奉献……
4、一段路，走了很久，懵然回头，才发现原来和现实已经拉下很长的一段距离，以前，已变得模糊不再清晰，流逝的剪影已那么陌生，当初的梦想已经远离了时光的轨迹，那份执着在心底已失去当初的勇气，是什么？改变了以前，是什么？懒散了情绪，或许，是生活，把咱们的意志一点一点的削弱，是现实，讽刺了以前的那份热忱，而如今，岁月荒芜，路还在咱们脚下延伸，应对未来，还得依然把那份执着继续。
5、理想是钥匙
6、一个有真正大才能的人会在工作过程中感到最高度的快乐。——歌德
7、人生真正的快乐，在于能对一个事业有所贡献，而自己认识到这是个伟大的事业。——萧伯纳
8、三大价值观进步是我们最主要的产品。——GE(通用电气公司)的企业理念
9、世界上最快而又最慢，最长而又最短，最*凡而又最珍贵，最容易忽视而又最令人后悔的就是时间。——高尔基
10、昨天是一张作废的支票，明天是一张期票，而今天则是你惟一拥有的现金——所以应当聪明地把握。——李昂斯
11、盛年不重来，一日难再晨，及时当勉励，岁月不待人。——陶渊明
12、提出一个问题往往比解决一个问题更重要，因为解决问题也许仅是一个数学上或实验上的技能而已。而提出新的问题新的可能性，从新的角度去看旧的问题，都需要有创造性的想像力，而且标志着科学的真正进步。——爱因斯坦
13、劳动是万物的基础，劳动者是支柱，他支撑着文明与进步的结构和它那辉煌的穹隆。——莫格索尔
14、提出一个问题往往比解决一个问题更重要，因为解决问题也许仅仅是一个教学上或实验上的技能而已。而提出新的问题新的可能性，从新的角度去看旧的问题，都需要有创造性的想像力，而且标志着科学的真正进步。——爱因斯坦
15、财富就像海水：你喝得越多，你就越感到渴。——贺拉斯
16、如果说美貌是推荐信，那么善良就是信用卡。——布尔沃一利顺
17、钱是个可恶的东西，用它可以办好事，也可以做坏事。——冈察洛夫
18、在消除贫困的时候，我们会拥有自己的财富，而拥有这笔财富，我们却会失去多少善心，多少美和多少力量啊！——泰戈尔
19、风从水上走过，留下粼粼波纹；骆驼从沙漠上走过，留下深深的脚印；哨鸽从天空飞过，留下串串欢韵；岁月从树林穿过，留下圈圈年轮。啊，朋友，我们从时代的舞台走过，将给社会留下些什么？花从春走过，留下缕缕花香；叶从夏走过，留下片片荫凉；风从秋走过，留下阵阵金浪；雪从冬走过，留下种种希望。啊，朋友，我们从人生的四季走过，将给人生留下些什么？
20、没有落日般的瑰丽，没有流云般的飘逸，但可以有水晶般的清纯与透明。没有大山般的巍峨，没有湖水般的轻柔，但可以有岩石般的坚毅与稳重。没有大海般的浩瀚，没有瀑布般的飞泻，但可以有泥土般的朴素与随和。
21、现代原子物理学的奠基者卢瑟福对思考极为推崇。一天深夜，他偶尔发现一位学生还在埋头实验，便好奇地问：“上午你在干什么?”学生回答：“在做实验。”卢瑟福不禁皱起了眉头，继续问：“那晚上呢?”“也在做实验。”勤奋的学生本以为能够得到导师的一番夸奖，没想到卢瑟福居然大为发火，厉声斥责：“你一天到晚都在做实验，什么时间用于思考?”
22、索尼：不迷信专家：近几年，日本索尼公司在招聘大学生时，对学校名称采取“不准问，不准说，不准写”的“三不”方针。公司认为，在激烈竞争和多变时代，企业需要各种人才，只有将各种不同的人聚集在一起，才能更好地发挥创造性，开发出新产品。只在少数大学中招聘人才，会使企业失去活力。
23、流逝的日子像一片片凋零的枯叶与花瓣，渐去渐远的是青春的纯情与浪漫。不记得曾有多少雨飘在胸前风响在耳畔，只知道沧桑早已漫进了我的心爬上了我的脸。当一个人与追求同行，便坎坷是伴，磨难也是伴。
24、一指之穴，能涸千里之河;一脔之味，能败十世之德。(清·唐甄)
25、一念之非即遏之，一动之妄即改之。(明·薛喧)
26、人人可以注意到，过着不道德生活的人比旁人更缺少不了使自己昏迷的药物;强盗或小偷，赌徒与妓-女没有麻醉品是不能生活的。——托尔斯泰
27、精神上的道德力量发挥了它的潜能，举起了它的旗帜，于是我们的爱国热情和正义感在现实中均得施展其威力和作用。——黑格尔
28、书籍使我们成为以往各个时代的精神生活的继承者。——钦宁格
29、没有哪本书坏到一无是处的地步。——小普林尼
30、巨大的财富对于一个不惯于掌握钱财的人，是一种毒害，它侵入他的品德的血肉和骨髓。——马克·吐温
31、你若失去财产，失之甚少；你若失去荣誉，失之甚多；以若失去勇气，失去一切。——严寄洲
32、失财产者，损失巨；失朋友者，损失尤巨；失名誉者，则完全损失矣。——西班牙谚语
33、每个人的天性中都有某种不便公开的成分，假如公之于众，必将冒犯别人（歌德）
34、我感到逐渐虚弱，所以我趁着我还能觉出心中的烈火，趁着我的脑子还清楚，我就赶快抓紧每一分钟的时间。死亡在守候着我，我就更加强了我对生活中的一切悲惨遭遇：瞎眼、不能动、剧烈的疼痛。尽管这个样子，我仍然是非常幸福的人。——《奥斯特洛夫斯基》
35、外疾之害，轻于秋毫，人知避之；内疾之害，重于泰山，而莫之避（南北朝·刘昼）
36、少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。——《长歌行》
37、心中有鬼的人无事也会忧心忡忡，他担心每片树丛中藏着狗熊————（罗·沃特金斯）
38、因为无能，才变得无用（巴尔扎克）
39、世界上最快而又最慢，最长而又最短，最*凡而又最珍贵，最容易被人忽视，而又最令人后悔的就是时间。————高尔基
40、时间就是生命，无端的空耗别人的时间，其实无异于谋财害命的。————鲁迅
41、各家都有各家的隐秘（法夸尔）
42、对于一个有本领的人，哪有过重的负担？对一个有决心的人，哪里有过远的路程？（印度）
43、书有自己的命运，要视读者接受的情况而定。——忒伦提乌斯·摩尔
44、读者的好恶能决定书的命运。——莫鲁斯
45、死去原知万事空，但悲不见九州同。王师北定中原日，家祭无忘告乃翁。——陆游
46、一般就在部分之中;谁不属于自己的祖国那麽他也就不属于人类。 —— 别林斯基
47、南北驱驰报主情,江花边草笑*生.一年三百六十日,都是横戈马上行。 —— 戚继光
48、养心莫若寡欲;至乐无如读书。——郑成功
49、除了野蛮国家，整个世界都被书统治着。——福尔特尔
50、善不积，不足以成名;恶不积，不足以灭身。(孔子)
——常用的万能作文评语 40句菁华
1、全文语言生动准确，情节精彩曲折，仿佛将读者带进了开心乐园，令人眉开眼笑。
2、注意观察具体事物，并展开合适的想象，这是本文的成功之处。
3、文章内容新颖，结构合理，流畅连贯，自然通达。
4、文章对……的气氛渲染充分而恰到好处，对文章重点…作了细腻而传神的刻画。
5、…切合实际，蕴含着朴素而深刻的哲理，读来令人精神振奋，情绪激昂。
6、详略得当，虚实相生，是本文的两大特色，……内容更丰富更生动。
7、文章前后连贯，形成完整的形象。
8、文章线索明朗，主题突出，紧紧围绕…进行。
9、文章边叙事边抒情。
10、xx同学，你知道吗？老师为你的进步感到好高兴啊！希望你再接再厉，并把著名作家奥斯托洛夫斯基的一句名言推荐给你，‘人应该支配习惯，而决不能让习惯支配人，一个人要不能去掉他的坏习惯，那简直一文不值’。
11、你的字迹工整，书写很优美，老师要向你学习。文章选材如果再新颖些，肯定会与书写交相辉映。你认为呢？
12、…以轻松愉快的语气，向我们娓娓道来，令人回味无穷。
13、刻画风景时，写出了本身对风景的领会，表达出了自己内心最真实的感觉。好比，看见第一棵小草抽芽时的惊喜，瞥见在自家屋檐下筑巢的燕子时的高兴，闻到桃花吐蕊的清香时发出的惊叹，听到老师宣布春游运动时的快乐……这些都是心田的感觉。在形貌风景的同时，恰到好处地表达出心田的感觉以致遐想，使习作生动，更真实，也会令他人冲动不已。
14、“”;再加上微风、杨柳、花香，笔下的春天就像一首诗，好美!
15、这篇文章以具体的事例生动优美的语言新颖别致的写法表现了对美好心灵的由衷赞。
16、这篇短文的特点可概括为亲切温馨隽永。
17、本文很好体现了…的特点深刻的主题与新颖的构思相得益彰。
18、想象力较丰富极具新意开头自我介绍引入下文另外文章语言简明扼要风格幽默误诙谐。
19、文章不长但过程叙述得很清楚人物的活动描述得也具体真实可信生动有趣全文结构紧凑完整文笔也较流畅。
20、开头直奔主题,让人一目了然。
21、开头点题,用词很吸引人。
22、简单介绍情况,自然过渡到下一段;
23、将…改成…更合适些,
24、自然承上启下,细节描写突出人物品质,令人感动。
25、叙事中夹写景,以已度人,将心比心。
26、这部分参照课文中的例子,语言过于*板,可适当修改,使语言更生动。
27、比喻句用得精当，加入了古诗进行联想,富有韵味。
28、…和…形成鲜明对比,突出…
29、对…的比喻用得妙。
30、引用名人名言经典事例，具有较强的说服力，更能有力地表达作者的观点。
31、论据充分有力，分析透彻合理，哲理性较强。
32、逻辑推理能力较弱，证据不够确凿充分。
33、语言*滑晓畅，刻画细致，描写生动;句意含蓄委婉，暗含深意。读毕如酒后余香，不绝于口。
34、过程详细，结尾却简略不全。结构不合理，给人以虎头蛇尾之感。
35、情节大起大落，转换太快，不够连贯自然。
36、选材过于通俗，不具一定的代表性，老题材老思想，*淡无奇。
37、虽然选择了生活中具有一定叙写价值的事件，但由于分析不透彻，挖掘不深，事件潜含的道理未能深刻地体现。
38、选材*淡无奇，过于老旧粗俗简单幼稚，不具新意，难于深刻地反映生活的时代性真实性。
39、虽述*常事，但分析透彻合理，理性挖掘较深，凸现了事件的本质。
40、从多方面多角度选材，充分体现了人物的个性特征，人物形象丰满。
